woman is water—drown we s(m)othering neckline waves and rocks she throws up like jewels across her skin; to catch weary sailors by a siren’s call tailored for the occasion…only then does she harden.
I like what you are doing here, but it would be more potent to write your, own stuff.
Maybe you will be more censored, but at the same time the reward will be bigger, and the right set of words strikes with fierce precision, where truly hurts them.
A creative state is not the same as a reactionary state. One rules over the other.
Rarely i will read something more than once, but this one got my attention.
Well done, keep writing my Aryan Lady, it is, really important that we see and hear the voice of real feminine input that makes sense and it is not a cheap, made obligatory verse with no purpose or bigger destiny.
You are right, in that I was inspired by that song. A pun adds an extra dimension to aquatic imagery. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you.
I appreciate your advice. There will be more essays in the near future, however it's nice to balance sharp criticism with something more lyrical once in a while. Reminds us what we're living for.
Beautiful, MZ, thank you & 88!
Thank you glad you enjoyed it.
Reminds me of this song: She Sells Sanctuary
The Cult
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cts0VN1-wgk
I like what you are doing here, but it would be more potent to write your, own stuff.
Maybe you will be more censored, but at the same time the reward will be bigger, and the right set of words strikes with fierce precision, where truly hurts them.
A creative state is not the same as a reactionary state. One rules over the other.
Rarely i will read something more than once, but this one got my attention.
Well done, keep writing my Aryan Lady, it is, really important that we see and hear the voice of real feminine input that makes sense and it is not a cheap, made obligatory verse with no purpose or bigger destiny.
You are right, in that I was inspired by that song. A pun adds an extra dimension to aquatic imagery. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you.
I appreciate your advice. There will be more essays in the near future, however it's nice to balance sharp criticism with something more lyrical once in a while. Reminds us what we're living for.